third man girl
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"His eyes are blue like the ocean between them"tugger said:Hahaha... Yeah, thanks Martin, that first line needs a little work doesn't it?![]()
Keep it. Makes perfect sense to me.
"Miles away, she imagines the moist tip of his tongue
Curve delicately across the arc of her eyelid,"
Mmm. Mmmmm. Mmmmmmm . . .
"But she watches this dance along her body
And breaks at his beautiful ballet."
That is truly lovely. Where do you find all these sweet thoughts?
Directions, please
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